come soon

how closer i thought you to be!
how far you are !
how desperate i am !
how mean you are!

running towards you
staking at everything,
i let you everything
whatever i could
but you could not give anything
which you should!

endless dreams of beautiful nights,
the charm of moon
as i feel you,
you are fading away soon.

as i search the ladder
you go up and up
as i go softer
you'r becoming rough and rough.

should i pick up the escalator
or you will be calm
would you give me an opportunity
or i should keep believing my palm

please! come and embrace me
before i kill my zeal
don't fade away your appeal
come soon until your importance i feel.

Comments

  1. Abhishek DuaJune 28, 2011 at 1:26 AM

    For a first poem its a great attempt....the emotions and the longing is well reflected....the reader can feel it....an emotional write which touches the heart

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  2. Prashant MishraJune 28, 2011 at 1:29 AM

    thanks.....

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